Monday, February 15, 2010

Spring

Fresh frilly green leaves
Hiding under dripping eaves
Winter's chill bereave
Posted by Andráste at 1:25 AM
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  1. Nona Natalie RaeFebruary 15, 2010 at 2:41 PM

    I like the visual that you display with this one, however, bereave and loss are very similar in meaning. So it is redundant to put both. Maybe instead of loss, use hold or cold and change bereave to bereaved.

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  2. AndrásteFebruary 15, 2010 at 3:55 PM

    Yes but one is a verb. Although... hmm.

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